Tag Archives: Copy Editing

Speaking up when the alarms go off

I read a nice piece just now by Dave Kindred on sportsjournalism.org on sports columnists’ appreciation and frustration with copy editors.

The story stemmed from the infamous Mark Whicker sports column on Jaycee Lee Dugard and what she missed in the world of sports while she was held captive in her kidnapper’s back yard for 18 years.

As tasteless, tacky and regrettable as Whicker’s column was, it’s also pretty bad that the Orange County Register’s editors working on it didn’t speak up when their internal alarms apparently went off.

I hope if I were ever in a situation like that, I’d have the courage say something. Of course, I’ve never come close to reading anything that despicable, but there have been bits here and there that troubled me enough to ask a co-worker or two, “Hey, does this read weird to you?” or “Should we take this out?”

I’ve heard of diva columnists having “no-edit clauses” (not at my job, thankfully), and I really can’t think of anything editing-wise much more appalling and arrogant. No word on whether Whicker was one of those though.

Anyway, the point of Kindred’s column was that Whicker was deprived of what every writer needs: an attentive editor. Kindred presumed that material-wise, Whicker was probably having a bad day coming up with something to write about and went in the wrong direction.

If Whicker is not a “no-edit” guy, it’s upsetting to think that a situation was in place where editors felt like they couldn’t speak up about their concerns. Kindred indicated Whicker was a well-respected veteran newsman before this debacle, not that he had a reputation for being edgy or inflammatory.

It’s  too easy sometimes for an editor to think to herself, “Well, he can say what he wants. It’s not my name at the top.”

But the job is about so much more than grammar and facts -  you have to have your internal sensitivity meter at level 10 at all times. That doesn’t mean you change every little thing, you just use your best judgment and seek a second or third opinion too.

There’s a fine line between changing too much and too little in copy. I have learned that the best way to let a writer have his or her “voice” is to have a reason for changing anything. If I change a single word, I want to have a defense ready if I am asked about it later. That method can be frustrating at times because it slows you down, but I have to remember that in the end, it indeed is not my name at the top.

After reading Kindred’s column, I have a new appreciation for columnist Joe Posnanski, who says in an e-mail to Kindred, “The best editors are worth ten times their weight in gold.”

They appreciate the recognition. (And that should have been “10″, Joe.)

Morrison a promising, if not potentially confusing, addition to Stars

It’s going to be tricky now that Brenden Morrow and Brendan Morrison are teammates.

But I think I can live with the deal Dallas made today in picking up the 33-year-old center off waivers from Anaheim. I hadn’t realized he was with the Ducks and apparently not doing so hot. That’s what I assume, anyway, since the Ducks waived him.

He’s a big-name player, and hopefully he can give the Stars some punch and fill in for Brad Richards, who has a broken wrist. Morrison has 10 goals and 12 assists in 62 games, so injury must not be an issue. Maybe he just needs a fresh start.

Thankfully, Brenden/Brendan Morrow/Morrison won’t be the expected copy editor’s nightmare unless the Stars go deep into the playoffs. (Which would be ideal.) Not sure when Morrow is expected back from his ACL injury though. And Morrison is an unrestricted free agent this summer.

Anyway, I like this move, but I wish the Stars had gotten a defenseman at the trade deadline.

I’m not sure if I see these Stars as a playoff team. It has been a rough year with Avery, the injury bug, Marty Turco not being himself, etc. but who knows. There’s 19 games left and the standings are tight.

I didn’t get to watch the beatdown of the Sharks from last night, but it’s an encouraging win over a great team. (I did see part of the gutless loss to Pittsburgh. Blech.)

If the Stars can use momentum from the Morrison acquisition and the win over San Jose, maybe they can get on a roll and secure a playoff spot.

The face of Tulsa unemployment

Just a short one today:

One of my former co-workers was interviewed by a local TV station on Friday. A Georgia native, he graduated from Missouri’s prestigious J-school last May. He started at the World a few months later and was laid off in January. He now works at Walgreens.

I hope he, and all the rest, land on their feet.

P.S. The owner of KOTV-6 and its sister station, KQCW, laid off 13 last August.